I am reading the book, “Memoirs of the Soul by Nan Merrick Phifer and came across a great tip. After you write a chapter give your draft to someone to read out loud. Sit back and listen to it as if it were written by a stranger. I’ve read mine out loud to others, but I think this would be very useful. You get an idea of the spots that need editing when the reader trips up. You can then make notes as they read it a second time.